Nothing is as Dangerous as a Keepsake Friend, who withers away with the weather and leaves you Restless in the midst of your internal chaos and commotion.
Without the title, this simply seems self-centered to me. With the title, I have more sympathy. But to put the entirety of the burden on the friend is unfair. Then it becomes not friendship but attachment.
A real friend never withers away... ever... they may turn into fine mist sometimes, but will always linger around even when it's hard for them to be around in your time of need.
Great Post!
ReplyDeleteI agree, but the dangerous part is is they are backstabbing and take your demise and use it against you. Why can't women trust eachother?
ReplyDeleteInteresting take on the prompts. I like what you've done with them.
ReplyDeleteWell said!
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I like the 'withers away with the weather' bit and the three little words, leave me breathless!
ReplyDeleteI wouldnt say dangerous.... painful fo sure. =/
ReplyDeleteWithout the title, this simply seems self-centered to me. With the title, I have more sympathy. But to put the entirety of the burden on the friend is unfair. Then it becomes not friendship but attachment.
ReplyDeleteA real friend never withers away... ever... they may turn into fine mist sometimes, but will always linger around even when it's hard for them to be around in your time of need.
ReplyDeleteIs it true friendship then ? maybe they have their own reasons!
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