Dec 30, 2009

Love, an ambush!


You meddled with my mind and left me thinking of nothing but you.
How could you do such a hideous thing to me?
Did you not say you want me?
Love me?
Is love an ambush for you?
Because the way I felt it, you ensnared me skillfully
and ran off leaving me behind with memories
I can’t seem to untangle from no matter how much I try.

14 Read and Said:

Leo said...

truth... this is..! wordplay is wonderful, but it is what it is.. the truth! :( loved it.. wonderful one Desi...

Raj said...

that burns your core apart and leaves you mourning for breath.

Katherine said...

So true! A wonderful piece.

Dee Martin said...

Lovely and bittersweet

anthonynorth said...

Excellent and powerful words.

b said...

Don't you just hate when that happens. The word play as Leo called it, is perfect!

b

Tim Remp said...

Great piece with a powerful message. Thank you for posting.

Lilibeth said...

Yes. It feels just like that sometime. That's poetry now.

ThomG said...

Nicely done. The wordplay is rather well done, and the ending sadly beautiful.

Stan Ski said...

It must be the animal instinct in both parties that leaves the human in one with this sense of dissatisfaction.

wordvamp said...

Excellent and true to life. Something that most of us can relate to. Loved this (Love the name of your blog too)!

3WW for Dec 30th, 2009

Lucy said...

this so brought back the memories of my many crushes as a youth!
written so cleverly!

Jeeves said...

So heartfelt and sad!

Yellow Tulip said...

lovd t dear.. its really very sad:(

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