Jun 28, 2009

Afterlife



A gain and again
F ather let me examine
T he tales of goodness
E ternal abode license
R ebelled I did
L ied the forbid
I wish I'd listened
F ather I am condemned
E ternal abode for me is torment

for Acrostic Only
Prompt 10 – Spirituality: AFTERLIFE


P ushing her way through
R unning after curfew
E very one eyed her
T horns and roses complied her
T o every woman she was envy
Y earning men found it funny

W oman of stature and grace
O thers wished to praise her race
M an only knew the want
A nd all she did was flaunt
N ever-ending she pledged to haunt

Prompt 12 – Movie Title: PRETTY WOMAN

5 Read and Said:

Savannah said...

AD these are wonderful, and very thought provoking. I also love the pictures; poems and photo complements each other. Glad you posted these in time.

Abdullah Tariq said...

o.O
Loved the poems!
Loved the rhyming!
Loved the pictures!

Americanising Desi said...

hey thank you :) not many have acknowldeged this but Savannah and Abdullah,
Thank you so much

Anonymous said...

Really really liked Afterlife! :)

Pretty Woman is good too!

Americanising Desi said...

actually goes without saying how mediocre I did :)

but thank you all

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