Mar 31, 2010
Caustic Love
If only I hadn’t let the hunches in my heart dictate the course of my life to you. I took your caustic love for healing and sacrificed my essence for you – only to wish now that I could have me back and let you go once and for all.
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hmm.. yeah, this rings true too.. a reality check again. our paths this wednesday are similar yet so different eh Desi?
Once again excellently done. Straight from the heart.
A much more different observation than that of Leo. Like night-and-day. But you both are keen observers of the human heart, I think.
Great feel of regret captured in this. Nice use of the words!
I can feel the hurting, once again. Sacrificial love can hurt the lover. Like Thom said--you picture well the human heart.
The flip side of the coin. (In reference to Leo's post)
Sadly, it often happens that rose-colored glasses skew the perception of the beloved when one falls in love -- then can come bitter regret. Powerful.
Hindsight is always better. If this is indeed true, did someone say "I told you so?"
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My favorite line "wish now I could have me back."
Why do we do that to ourselves? Love should never rob you of you.
A poignant reminder of broken love.
amazing how we give ourselves away... monster love
A flip on reality check! Nice!
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